I heard my mum loudly screaming over a scary game
called rush of blood on VR.
called rush of blood on VR.
I saw my brother viciously throw the black controller on the floor.
I felt a gust of wind swiftly go by as I was walking
down the rocky road.
down the rocky road.
I wondered how my mum could afford 2 very expensive devices
just so we could play on them.
just so we could play on them.
That was a cool describing words
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